Thought…

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This song had been on the cards for quite some time :-D!! Just thought I'd put the first draft in…

[Only Riffy rhythm highly muted and flangy…]
[Drums 1 roll]
[Both the guitars and the base come in with a sweep and the drums go wild]
[Just the drums and base]

All the guys in the alley checking out what you got
Making heads turn, reaching out what you sought

[riff comes back again]

Straight hair, maybe a wave put right here and there
Torn jeans, crumpled shirt, tight as much as y'can dare…

[a pause…]
[Full blast … All the instruments come again…]
[Main chorus]

She's the one that I thought…
Walking down, cool and hot…
Find her, can I where…
If I do get, can I bear…

[Slow down… Drums and base…]

Got a chance to see her as I shook my head
Crazy style she's got, dropping me dead.

[riff comes in…]

Little time thinking thoughts fluttering over the bar

[pause]

She was moving fast, all i got to see o her was her car….

[Cymbals crash… after the pause]
[Then full blast instruments come in]
[vocals scream]

She's the one that I thought…
Walking down, cool and hot…
Find her, will I where…
If I do get, can I bear…

She's the one that I thought…
Walking down, cool and hot…
Find her, will I where…
If I do get, can I bear…

[Lead kinda riffy with a lotta holds…
The rhythm is playing the base riff]

[guitar strong riff but muted + drums + base]
[Vocals mellow]

Tying knots, cringing heads, she's a spectacle dot
Sporty heels, suffocating with what she's got…

[Full blast after a short pause]

Straight hair, maybe a wave put right here and there
Torn jeans, crumpled shirt, tight as much as y'can dare…

[Repeat before the lead]

She's the one that I thought…
Walking down, cool and hot…
Find her, will I where…
If I do get, can I bear…

[Hold the riff for a short period]

Just the lyrics.

All the guys in the alley checking out what you got
Making heads turn, reaching out what you sought
Straight hair, maybe a wave put right here and there
Torn jeans, crumpled shirt, tight as much as y'can dare…

[Main chorus]
She's the one that I thought…
Walking down, cool and hot…
Find her, can I where…
If I do get, can I bear…

Got a chance to see her as I shook my head
Crazy style she's got, dropping me dead.
Little time thinking thoughts fluttering over the bar
She was moving fast, all i got to see o her was her car….

She's the one that I thought…
Walking down, cool and hot…
Find her, will I where…
If I do get, can I bear…

She's the one that I thought…
Walking down, cool and hot…
Find her, will I where…
If I do get, can I bear…

Tying knots, cringing heads, she's a spectacle dot
Sporty heels, suffocating with what she's got…

Straight hair, maybe a wave put right here and there
Torn jeans, crumpled shirt, tight as much as y'can dare…

She's the one that I thought…
Walking down, cool and hot…
Find her, will I where…
If I do get, can I bear…

Have to make this into a song … Damn it's running well in my head now :-D!!

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11 thoughts on “Thought…

  1. Oh yes!!

    Even I thought about that when I read it now. :-D!! Will work on it, when I am back into the mood for some thinking..

    Will check out your blog dude. Btw, even I am a fledgeling blogger!! Welcome to ze club!!

  2. Divya

    πŸ˜€
    Song-writer too?!!!
    And the mail….its shud have said….most grossest or smthg!! :D!!

    no joining dates yet…but TCS it is…
    N 11-2 was always there…the trouble is it extends to 4-5 now!! πŸ˜€

    Now tat am done with grinnin….TC n enjoy,
    Divs

  3. @ Divs: Hahaha!! Yeah yeah… but ya gotta agree! Other adjectives would include, comprehensive, creative, hilarious as well :-D!!

    Awesome. TCS is a good place to work I have heard, although I had to forego it for SISL. :-D!

    Yeah, now’s the time to experiment yaar!! Dontcha worry, TCS will put you back into the 10-5 sleep mode, or so I have heard ;-)!

  4. aweesomeeee dudeeee….i wanna play d guitar for the acoustic version of the song….yeaaah eaaah!!!!! …hey pssst..btw, heard d news abt d imminent ‘trip’…a**..write me a mail tellin more.. (i met ajeesh)..i’ve got some news to tell ya as well! :))

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